The frozen crystals came closer Dense deep cloud kept darkening A tiny drop came thundering down Fell in the ocean and screamed in silence Overjoyed at the union, it smiled in circles Dissolved its state and became great We happily swam In the ocean of friendship A threat came on one day Followed with a shocking news No more drops in the ocean Made me cry until I dry Realized that true friendship Can never end even one die Dedicating this verse as An ode to Friendship
I wrote this for Riti sipping the coffee with tears in my eye-lid, “Please don’t cry,” Isha, said, I couldn’t control my tears. We went our living room to clear Riti’s baggage for keeping them safe as a treasure. I unzipped her first bag, found her mobile, purse, etc… I unlocked her iPhone to see her photos that she took wearing the saree I gifted her for last birthday. “How come you know her password,” she said, “It is my name,” I said, as soon I unlocked it found a half-typed message. I shed tears on reading that message. “Dear, what happened, please say me,” she shouted…
yes, true friendship can never end.. love your imagery
glad you loved it… thanks and merry christmas…….
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Wonderful words, I love it
Thanks and glad to have you here..
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Thanks Ji for nominating this post for Celebrate Poets of 2010 Awards..
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agreed with Leo, moving on :333~~~~
Thanks Leo.. It was nice to hear from you and leo the same..
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I wish to know what happen next.
go ahead and read na..
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will see what’s next on the i phone…
Wait and watch Ji..
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ohh.. u leave it at the right place.. leave the reader waiting for, and wanting more.. nice one..
Oh Leo nice to hear those wonderful words from you.. Thank you so much..
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A beautiful ode to friendship…great poem…please don’t ever take Isha for granted, she’s all you have now and her patience is admirable…lest she will leave you coz all you could do is make Riti seem to be the be all and all of your life!
Now I wish to know what happens next…
You are sooooooo good SiS!
This is a very good attempt for you at novel writing!
Glad to hear those wonderful words from you Amity.. I enjoy writing this and hoping the same from my readers.. Hope you enjoyed.. Thank you so much.. Wait and watch this space for more twists..
PS: All the characters name mentioned play a very important role in this story.. Siddesh is not just for informing Rahul about Riti through phone..
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