Z to A in 26 Days – Nov 13th – O is for Ode

Posted: November 13, 2010 by Someone Is Special in Z-A Challenge
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The frozen crystals came closer
	Dense deep cloud kept darkening
A tiny drop came thundering down
	Fell in the ocean and screamed in silence
Overjoyed at the union, it smiled in circles
	Dissolved its state and became great
We happily swam
	In the ocean of friendship

A threat came on one day
	Followed with a shocking news
No more drops in the ocean
	Made me cry until I dry
Realized that true friendship
	Can never end even one die
Dedicating this verse as
	An ode to Friendship
I wrote this for Riti sipping the coffee with tears in my eye-lid, “Please don’t cry,” Isha, said, I couldn’t control my tears. We went our living room to clear Riti’s baggage for keeping them safe as a treasure. I unzipped her first bag, found her mobile, purse, etc… I unlocked her iPhone to see her photos that she took wearing the saree I gifted her for last birthday. “How come you know her password,” she said, “It is my name,” I said, as soon I unlocked it found a half-typed message. I shed tears on reading that message. “Dear, what happened, please say me,” she shouted…

Comments
  1. yes, true friendship can never end.. love your imagery

  2. meirozavian says:

    Wonderful words, I love it

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  4. agreed with Leo, moving on :333~~~~

  5. VENIV says:

    I wish to know what happen next.

  6. Morning says:

    will see what’s next on the i phone…

  7. ohh.. u leave it at the right place.. leave the reader waiting for, and wanting more.. nice one..

  8. Amity says:

    A beautiful ode to friendship…great poem…please don’t ever take Isha for granted, she’s all you have now and her patience is admirable…lest she will leave you coz all you could do is make Riti seem to be the be all and all of your life!

    Now I wish to know what happens next… :-)

    You are sooooooo good SiS!

    This is a very good attempt for you at novel writing! :-)

    • Glad to hear those wonderful words from you Amity.. I enjoy writing this and hoping the same from my readers.. Hope you enjoyed.. Thank you so much.. Wait and watch this space for more twists..

      PS: All the characters name mentioned play a very important role in this story.. Siddesh is not just for informing Rahul about Riti through phone..

      –Someone Is Special–

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