“Hmm why don’t you describe your dreams?” she paused for three seconds and “Did you kiss me? If so how many times and…”
“Hey… Hey… Give me a break… Of course, I kissed you but never counted those treasures and…”, “and… what…,” she exclaimed… “I saw an angel dressed up in sea blue colour half saree, tiny heart-shaped studs; thin copper wire sized silver chain and the most beautiful ponytail. Wow! She looked very hot and I felt that an angel has come down to shower her blessings on me. She came in to my room pushed me on the bed…”, “Aw! then what happened to that poor guy,” she sounded romantic, “She came in closer, just in seconds she saved me from dying of thirsty… Hmm she watered my lips with the sweetest juice, wow… and she touched me…” “W… Where…” she sounded husky, “the place she is residing, yup… It’s my heart…” I said…
“Wow! This was the best description I ever have from you… Oops! I mean I ever have in my life. You are super romantic and I am sure about that. What that girl did to you?”
“Hmm that stupid girl woke me up with a cute ring tone…” I said, “Aw… So sad of you…” she said.
“So what that girl will do to me?” I sounded husky to create a feel, “Probably, she after touching you, i.e. heart, she would have pinched your heart to stop dreaming such romantic ones,” she said.
“Of course she would have pinched just for dreaming…” and I paused for few seconds for her response, “You are a bad guy, aren’t you?” she said in a husky voice. “I am waiting for your sweet response,” I said, “What… what response you expect from me,” she sounded little huskier… “Stop dreaming and start d…”, “OMG… Stop!” she urged, “Common continue…” I looted a second… “Stop dreaming idiot… I have to say that you swept me off the floor… Truly, a romantic person I fell in love with… Moreover, I felt whatever you described and you have such power in your words,” she blushed and so I am…
We continued smiling for few minutes and I added fuel to the fire with my Haiku.
Fuelled by your voice
Imprisoned in your cute eyes
I kissed you with bliss
“I miss you here,” she said… “Just twenty more days left,” I said, “Twenty more dear” She sounded little worried…
“I… I… Love…. Love… ‘U’, ‘U Isha’…” we said in unison.
This chapter amused me
Wonderfully written =3
Glad to know that.. Thanks for the great support Riika..
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the tale is hotting up…..lets c if they marry ..
Glad you felt the tension.. Wait and watch..
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Oh it’s getting hot and romantic and full of suspense now…
Are they to get wed in twenty one days?
Let’s see…
They may be.. Wait and watch this space.. Thank you so much Amity..
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Nice Haiku….i wish i could write haikus
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Glad to know that.. Thank you so much..
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perfect poet award for you.
Happy Saturday!
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Thank a lot Ji..
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Nice post..
http://mangop.blogspot.com/2010/11/umbrella.html
thanks a lot man..
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going on well.. slow but sure progression
Thanks a lot Leo.. Of course, I want the progression to be slow and steady as it has to be written in 50k words and interesting too.. For Z-A Challenge I am patching in with some contintuity.. Let’s see how the challenge goes on …
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you got u already?
well done.
Yes Ji.. Thanks a ton..
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