for my dream one, “The First Waters”………….
Silently, I waited; I searched for the signs.
I looked all around for myself different from me.
The lavender rays glittering in the air,
Of which the dandelion sun had no share!
The sweetness of time, gone without notice.
All because of the treasure I cannot miss!
The senses submitted themselves to a superior sense,
That rose above and name itself ‘Love’.
But the waters are new and the feet are weak.
What if I slipped and got myself drowned?
The light of hope accompanied the thirst;
The fear became an imagination, forgotten first.
Will the light lead me to the sun?
Or blind me with its overpowering force?
I step into the waters trusting the light,
That broke the silence of my searching eyes.
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar. M
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Its really nice…i love it…
By: kaviyarasan on May 22, 2008
at 9:06 pm
Hi dude..
Wow wat a way to express love….
It sounds good..
Post many new poems like this…
Take Care..
By: K S Balan on May 22, 2008
at 9:13 pm
This lovely lines shows the fear of a man who has a thinking at first that it will be a success or not..But at last he got a faith that surely it’ll get success and he stepped in to the dark water stepping to a region of bright sunlight….Yes, he is correct life is all about the faith n trying to achieve it…those who have more power to do this will be a successful person forever….
By: Mani on May 22, 2008
at 10:23 pm
Great! Wat a nice way to express the internal feels of a solitary guy who’s getting to love a girl for the first time in life!!! His silence of senses that is introduced in the first line is broken at the last line… wen u start loving eyes do speak na! Wonderful lines really full of expressive feels. Lookin fwd much more of this. Take care
By: Raman on May 28, 2008
at 9:41 am
Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation
Anyway … nice blog to visit.
cheers, Countersign.
By: Countersign on June 19, 2008
at 11:57 am
really great hat off your lovely peom…this love peom
express about one who love a girl.wheather he vil succeed or not.treasure gonna achieve by him s love…watever thats is lavendar glittering n sun light…that never hurt him…his silence of searchin eyes kept faith in success in love
wat i really learn from this peom?
you vil succeed watever distraction comes around u.whoever giggling ..never mind…being silence s the way for success….
nice love peom….wat happenin around me i feel it in this peom ..take care
By: kaviyarasan on July 2, 2008
at 8:12 pm